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Post by alex on Jun 27, 2007 14:46:25 GMT -5
hopefully 11 years is the charm ::Alex thought as he walked up to a woman:: have you seen a woman with mocca skin, pointy ears and purple eyes? woman:why yes , she took off with my daughters soul to heal her. ::Alex grunted when the woman mentioned taking off with a soul:: you let her do that ? mother: why yes but i was still sad since I'm living alone. ::Alex wanted to leave right now but he needed info:: do you know where they went? mother: i think she said something about hijrah before she left, whatever that is. airship hijrah, is she a pirate? thank you. mother: please don't hurt the sorceress or my daughter whatever.
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Post by Airlia Eyanson on Jun 27, 2007 14:52:14 GMT -5
(OOC- Whos character is this?)
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Post by alex on Jun 27, 2007 16:01:05 GMT -5
(ooc- mine)
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Post by Airlia Eyanson on Jun 27, 2007 16:05:33 GMT -5
(OOC- LOL, new guy? Or someone's alt character?)
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Post by Natalia on Jun 28, 2007 22:34:19 GMT -5
(OOC: New guy. Actually my cousin. He's ten. Memory agreed to let him stay if I showed him the ropes. Judging from his first post, we have a long way to go)
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Post by Airlia Eyanson on Jun 28, 2007 22:45:01 GMT -5
(OOC- He's fine, I was just wondering who it was.....he'll get used to it. I've read worse. Just need to maybe space it out more for now until he gets the rhythm)
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Post by Natalia on Jun 28, 2007 23:06:06 GMT -5
(OOC: Thanks Infin. That means a lot coming from you. And whatever advice you can offer me or him, is most welcome)
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Post by Infinity Paige on Jun 28, 2007 23:17:05 GMT -5
(OOC- I'll do you one better!)
Heres his post and to simply fix it for now until he gets better...I'd do this:
hopefully 11 years is the charm
::Alex thought as he walked up to a woman::
have you seen a woman with mocca skin, pointy ears and purple eyes?
woman:why yes , she took off with my daughters soul to heal her.
::Alex grunted when the woman mentioned taking off with a soul::
you let her do that ?
mother: why yes but i was still sad since I'm living alone.
::Alex wanted to leave right now but he needed info::
do you know where they went?
mother: i think she said something about hijrah before she left, whatever that is.
airship hijrah, is she a pirate?
thank you.
mother: please don't hurt the sorceress or my daughter
whatever.
============================================= Eventually we can work on capitalizing everything. (Sorry petpeave of mine! As well as identifying who is speaking in text, but it really isn't a bad post...especially considering age! Just keep posting...people will post with you once we all start going again and get met up!)
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Post by Natalia on Jun 30, 2007 0:16:36 GMT -5
(OOC: Infinity, you rock! Thanks for your help ^_^)
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Post by alex on Jul 6, 2007 18:26:59 GMT -5
(ooc yeah thanks infinity)
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Post by alex on Jul 11, 2007 21:34:54 GMT -5
(OOC: This topic is open for the lot of you)
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Post by alex on Jul 16, 2007 16:53:01 GMT -5
::Alex was ashamed just by talking to this woman::
I can't belive she let a total stranger run off with her daughter especially since she'll just grow old and wither away in lonelyness
::Normally Alex would crush the woman but for once he actually felt sympathy::
Wow Im really changing
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Post by Airlia Eyanson on Jul 16, 2007 20:51:01 GMT -5
(OOC- Sorry to interrupt but awesome, much better post, perfect!! *applauding*)
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Post by alex on Jul 20, 2007 17:27:43 GMT -5
Now I'll head down to Balamb
(OOC- Sorry if this is inconvenient )
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